Feb 03 2010

On The Third Day (3rd Feb 2010)

Published by KiwiVagabond at 2:33 am under Thoughts from NZ soil

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On the third day he rose
uncertain and unsure about crucifixion
did it always come with love
was blood the colour of a lovers rose
were rifts in heaven always accompanied by pain

on the third day he rose
carried a dull ache all day
that night still hollow
wrapped his arms around a wine red pillow
and slept
unable to dream of her
walking in the garden alone

2 Responses to “On The Third Day (3rd Feb 2010)”

  1. Monte StevensNo Gravataron 05 Feb 2010 at 6:23 pm

    Nicely done, my friend.

  2. Monte StevensNo Gravataron 05 Feb 2010 at 6:28 pm

    Graham, for some reason I cannot comment on your post dated the 4th, so I am posting my comment here,

    I believe it’s important to have a heart to search for a relationship with our God and not just learn about God from others. The relationship we establish will teach us far better than what others want to teach us. I admire your search, may it be a wonder to your heart.

    We do have to meet sometime.

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